[关键词]医药论文英文摘要
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1、原文：
DeterminationofgallicAcidinZhixuetingliquidsbytlcscanning
ZHouQun1，xula-ying2(1.Departmentofpharmacology，tongjimedicalc
ollege，Huazhonguniversityofscienceandtechnology，wuhan430030，ch
ina;2.theFacultyofpharmacy，Hubeicollegeoftraditionalchineseme
dicine，wuhan430061，china)
ABstrActobjective:todeterminethecontentofgallicacidinZhixueti
ngliquids.methods:Zhixuetingliquidsweredissolvedbydistilledwat
er，andthenextractedintothesamplewithbutanaletc.thesampleswe
redeterminatedbytlcscanning(λs=280nm，λr=350nm).result:theaver
agerecoveryratewas96.36%andrsD=2.39%.thecontentsofgallicacid
in3fivebatchesofsampleswere0.38，0.42and0.47mg/ml.conclusion:
themethodissimple，convenientandavailable.
KeYworDstlcscanning;Zhixuetingliquids;Determination;gallicacid
修正：
DeterminationofgallicAcidinchuxueting1oralliquidsbytlcscannin
g
ZHouQun1，xula-ying2(1.schoolofpharmacy2，tongjimedicalcollege，
Huazhonguniversityofscienceandtechnology，wuhan430030，china;2.
theFacultyofpharmacy，Hubeicollegeoftraditionalchinesemedicine，
wuhan430061，china)
Abstractobjective:todeterminethecontentofgallicacidinchuxueti
ngoralliquids.methods:thechuxuetingoralliquidwasdissolvedind
istilledwater，andthenextracted（intothesample删去）withwater-s
aturaledn-butanol3etc.forthepreparationofsamples.thesampleswe
resubjectedtogallicaciddeterminationbytlcscanning(λs=280nm，λ
r=350nm).results:theaveragerateofrecoverywas96.36%，（and删去）
rsD=2.39%.thecontentsofgallicacidin3（five删去）batchesofsam
pleswere0.38，0.42and0.47mg/mlrespectively.conclusion:themethod
issimple，convenientandfeasible.
KeYworDstlcscanning;chuxuetingoralliquids;Determination;gallic
acid
点评：
1、zhixueting应为“止血停”而非“出血停”，自相矛盾。“出血停”也可译为
hemorrhage-stopping，以方便国外读者理解。
2、school可作“（大学里的）院”解，原意是“药学院”，而非“药理教研室”
，故改之。
3、斜体n表示“正”。
2、原文：
contentDeterminationofemodininQingremingmucapsules
luoming-zhu1，ZHAngHong2(1.HubeiproviceinstituteofDrugcontrol，
wuhan430030，china;2.the75310medicalteamoftheArmy)
ABstrActobjectives:todeterminationcontentofemodininQingremingm
ucapsules.methods:tlcswasused，silicageltlcplate，developingso
lventwasBenzene-ethylfermate-formicacid-methanol-water(3:1:0.05:0.1
:0.5)ofwhichtheuppersolutionλs=435nm，λr=530nm.result:thelinea
rrelationshipofsampleapplicationwhichrangedbetween0.168-3.09μg
wasgood.theregressionequationwasbelow:Y=105417.7x-1115.6，r=0.9
995;areragerecoverywas100.53%，rsD=3.38%.conclusion:thismethodi
ssimple，accurateandconvenient.
KeYworDstlcs;Qingremingmuccapsules;emodin
修正：
DeterminationofemodincontentinQingremingmu1capsules
luoming-zhu1，ZHAngHong2(1.HubeiprovicialinstituteofDrugcontrol
，wuhan430030，china;2.the75310medicalteamoftheArmy)
ABstrActobjective:tosetupamethodforthedetermination（content删
去）ofemodincontentinQingremingmucapsules.methods:inthetlca
ssay，a0.5%canboxymethylcellulosesodium(wasused删去)silicagelg
plateandadevelopingsolventwithamixtureofbenzene—ethylformat
e—formicacid—methanol—water(3:1:0.05:0.1:0.5)astheuppersolution
wereused.λs=435nm，λr=530nm.results:Agoodlinearrelationshipwas
foundwhenthesampleamount(which删去)rangedbetween0.168-3.09μg
（wasgood删去）.theregressionequationwasasfollows:Y=105417.7x-1
115.6，r=0.9995.theaveragerateofrecoverywas100.53%，rsD=3.38%.co
nclusion:themethodissimple，convenientandaccurate.
KeYworDstlc;Qingremingmuccapsules;emodin
点评：
1、中成药名用斜体书写，也可译作removingpathogenicheattoimproveacui
tyofvision。
3、原文：
researchontheAcutetoxicityofHuningcapsule
xinZhi-wei，ZAngZhi-he，mAixiao-xia，FengJun，YAngwan-qing，liAoH
ong-li(teachingandresearchsectionofpharmacy，thethirdmedicalun
iversity，chengducollegeofplA610081，china)
ABstrActobjective:toobserveandtesttheacutetoxicityofHuningca
psuleonKunmingmiceafterani.g.methods:countthedeathcasesofm
icein7daysafterthei.g.andworkoutthelD50ofHuningcapsule.r
esults:thelD50ofHuningcapsuleonmiceis3981mg/kg.
KeYworDsHuningcapsule;Acutetoxicity;lD50
修正：
AnexperimentalstudyoftheAcutetoxicityofHuningcapsules1
xinZhi-wei，ZAngZhi-he，mAixiao-xia，FengJun，YAngwan-qing，liAoH
ong-li(teachingandresearchsectionofpharmacy，chengdumilitarymed
icalcollege，thethirdmilitarymedicaluniversity，chengdu610081，ch
ina)
ABstrActobjective:toobserveanddeterminetheacutetoxicityofHuni
ngcapsules(onKunmingmice删去)afterasingleintragastricadministr
ationinthemouse.methods:50Kunmingmicewererandomlypidedinto
5equalgroups，with10animalsineachgroup.Asingledoseof7500，
5630，4200，3150and2360mg/kg-1ofthecontentofthecapsulesweread
ministenedthroughagastrictubetoeachofthemiceofthe5groups，
respectively.thenumbersofthedeathsofthemicewithin7dayswere
noteddownandthemediarletherdose(lD50)ofHuningcapsuleswascal
culated.(countthedeathcasesofmicein7daysafterthei.g.andwo
rkoutthelD50ofHuningcapsule.删去)results:thelD50ofHuningca
psuleinmicewas3981mg/kg.conclusion:Huningcapsuleshaveonlyami
noracutetoxicity.itisthereforesafetousethedrugclinically.Fu
rtherstudyofitstoxicityinlong-termapplicationisrequired.
KeYworDsHuningcapsules;toxicity，acute;lD50
点评：
1、“呼宁胶囊”也可译作antitussiveandantiasthmaticcapsules.